First,fortunately,I saw the beautiful rainbow!That was amazing and exciting!After the ticket to take the elevator down to the river, each person received a blue plastic raincoat. I like its colour. We took the ship"maid of the mist"to visit the falls nearly and clearly.
Cruise slightly near Great Falls,will be the impact of falling water and sharp swing waves.Storm-like drops of water will drop to about face, raincoat can't resist.The momentum of it to the grand,rich and the vastness of the water vapor shocked all of the visitors.We are all very happy!
I hope one day I can visit this great falls again together with my family for I wanna to enjoy my happiness with them.
Hi~~Could change your post color ? Because it's easy to mix with the background.
ReplyDeleteI hope one day I can visit this great falls again together with my family ,too.I want to visit it from Toronto
Your post was very descriptive and you included examples and details. I felt like I was right there! Some suggestions:
ReplyDelete1. Capitalize proper nouns - Maid of the Mist
2." Wanna" is how it sounds when fast talking Americans say "want to". In writing, you should use "want to".
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